Sunday, July 5, 2009

Page 6 - Awake - Incomplete

Panel 1
RL view:
Nurse leaning over the side of the bed.
Well good morning sir, how are you feeling?

Panel 2
Dark view:
Succubus leaning in.
Hmmmm, you are looking tasty today.

Panel 3
RL view:
Hospital Hall (viewed from left to right: dad, mom, doctor, doorway)
Mom seen in hallway speaking with a doctor, husband having an arm around her waist.
Mom says to doctor: "Will he be alright?"
Doctor responding: "He's a tough breed, but he should be fine in a few d..."
(Loud scream from doorway) AAaaaahhh!!

Panel 4

Page 5 - Kitty - Ready for sketch

Panel 1:
Real view: Kids driving grandpa across pavement. One car drives past. Stores in the background.

Panel 2:
Scene look:
Currently walking in front of a pet store ("pet store" printed on the front window), young kittens in the front window, an orange/white striped kitten is standing against the window with it's front two paws. A gray one with black ears on the side sleeping balled up.

Junior takes notice of the kitties, and tugs his sister at the shirt (sister was pushing the chair). Sis look! Kitties!

Panel 3:
Sister crouches down next to junior and looks trough the window: "Awww they're so cute!"
Grandpa taking a swing with his cane at a dog that is sniffing his wheelchair.

Pamel 4:
Wheelchair starts to move down the street (which is slightly slanted).
Grandpa looking over his shoulder and waving his cane angrily at the dog behind him.
Dog showing it's teeth at grandpa.
Kids still poking at the window with kitties in it.

Panel 5:
Darkness view
Dark wagon racing full speed down the mountain.
Dark lord muttering from inside: Hmmm. Something is wrong...

Panel 6:
Real view
Showing sister with hands in front of her mouth
Brother with large eyes saying: Oh Shi...
*CRASH* - sound

Page 4 - Rememberance - Ready for sketch

RL view: (Continuation from page 3)
Park scene.
Old peoplefeeding pigeons. Grandpa sitting in wheelchair, kids on / near the bench.

Dark view:
Dark lord feeding minions who are in a feeding frenzy, An attractive dark haired lady walking up to him, a thin tail slightly hidden from view.

She comments about his strong looking, well fed minions,
Trailing a hand over his shoulder she comments about his trailing a finger over his shoulder .
dreadlord looks up, thinks he recognizes the person,

She prances around, not quite familiar, she asks if she can perhaps interest him in ''something sweet'' while her thin tail curls around his leg. Placing a hand on each of his shoulders she leans forward, pouting her lips for a kiss.

RL view:
Real world kicks in, shows an ugly old hag showing a wide rotten smile leering close to grandpa with a candy wrapper in her hand.

Grandpa: "Ghaa, begone you succubus!" *forcibly smashes the blunt end of his cane into her face*, causing the old lady to falls over backward.

The kids take notice and drive him off. Junior drives granpa off, while the sister checks the old lady who has fallen over. Holding her hand and helping her get up. Old lady clutching her face with the other hand. Blood dripping on the ground.

Page 3 - Minions - Sketched

RL world:
panel 1 (perhaps merge with 2)
- Showing family at dinner table, with grandpa poking his chicken with a fork.
- mom baking eggs.
mom: Kids, can you take granpa to the park this afternoon?
kids: Awww but mooooom...!

panel 2
- Dad peering over newspaper: Now kids, you know what we've discussed...
kids: Fiiiine!

Dark vision:
panel 3
- showing (nightmare) 2 horses with carriage being drawn through the night, thunder in the back showing evil scenery / mountain pass with castle.

panel 4
- carriage standing still, overlord next to it.
- overlord throwing eyeballs to a pack of winged 'creatures'
overlord: Feed, my pets.

RL world
panel 5/6
- Showing Grandpa feeding pigeons while the two kids sit on a bench nearby.
Grandpa: (muttering/mumble) Feed...
Sister: What is it with old people and feeding pigeons...

Page 2 - Torture - Posted

Subject on the rack of pain: - AAAAAAAaaahhhhhh !!!! -
GranDad: Pain...

Subj cowled in a corner: - Nooo, noo. no please, noo!! -
GD: Fear....

Subj hugging window bars of his cell: - *sob* *snort* -
GD: Despair..

Subj getting his heart torn out: - *shnick* *slice* *gurgle* -
GD: Death.

Mom: Dad! Quit playing with your food.
> GD poking fork at some chicken, drooling gravy.

Page 1 - Intrusion - Posted

1: The time is nigh...
2: I will tolerate these intrusions into my lair no longer.
3: I shall have their heads!
4: Tomorrow will... ..?
5: Granda...?
6: Mom says dinner is ready.